ultraviolet

Neep said she's gonna post at about 3:30 her time today. That's two hours before us AS.

Obviously I have a bunch of re-writing to do. Dex Reemer and Emily are two completely different people. Dex Reemer found out about Emily's life--as well as a few other ...

Thanks for the review Skins! :) Tenses and commmas... yeah, those are my downfalls. Thanks for pointing them out and I'll work on it. I'll edit this once I have ...

Blake After we'd gotten all the information we could from Anika I strayed off and started pacing. No. No, no, no. No, no, no, no. No. This couldn't be happening. ...

Actually, she just wanted that many to start. I think we can have more than that.

Here to review! Red = Corrections Blue = Things I like Bold = Comments James and Emily continued to be really nice to me, and I was happy to, after ...

Jackie Deep breaths. That's what I told myself over and over and over. It helped calm me. A little. When the woman came in with the syringe I willingly took ...

Mind doing the next couple parts of "The Ringebearers"? They're part of the novel, so you can get to them from my link to the first part. Thanks. :)

Blake When I woke up in the morning Michel was gone. I sat up and surveyed the area. He wasn't the only one. Ellie and Jackie were missing too. I ...

OK. That's what I thought but I wasn't sure.

>OK! I'll give it a few days first, though. In case she comes

Who exactly is getting kidnapped? I know Jackie is, but I've kind of lost count. Plus, we don't want too many people getting kidnapped because then there would be no ...

Here to review! Red = Corrections Blue = Things I like Green = How I would reword it Bold = Comments My name is Lilla , and I have always ...

>If TexanWriter doesn't post by Friday I'm just going to leave our battle, OK? Because by then it's been a week

Thanks for the review! :) I really appreciate it! :) I know, I'm addicted to smilies! :)