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JOIN THE CLUB =3 A/N: Name changed from "The Deserter". I shake out and close my umbrella at the doorway, almost dropping my packages in the process. Rebalancing them in ...

This isn't going to be overly long because, well, there's not much to comment on. (I hope you're happy - you're making me look like a crappy reviewer, thanks so ...

Hey Skinsles! Okay, so I may be misinterpreting things (okay, I probably am... >.>) but the way I read this, Zoey was hiding at the beginning. Which, how could Luke ...

Hey there! So, like GryphonFledgling said, the pacing here is a lot better - a lot . You have a nice mix of current happenings, exposition, and thoughts. However, there ...

Thanks for the reviews. I'm not a very good poet, so I really appreciate them. =) lily>> I want to say you have... but I'm honestly not sure. xD And ...

Why is it so hard to imagine something harder; a life where it's not a given, not something free. I want to feel the heated passion of the spirit burning ...

He first saw her at the state park, staring past the cliffs that led to the wide old river, and he knew that she wasn't happy. There was something in ...

I like this idea. I think it would definitely encourage people who don't want to sacrifice quality reviews for quantity. :)

I almost hate to get in the mess of things, but here are my two cents: Last year, at 13, I wouldn't have been ready to date. I was insecure ...

Hey there! (I like to think that by now you'll realize that I'm not going to read twenty reviews... so if I repeat anything, sorry.) It was nagging me in ...

Hey there, Skinsles! Again, I only read a few of the reviews, so sorry if I repeat anything. Also again, you're really making this hard on me, you know that? ...

Hey Skinsles! So, I'm not going to read your past reviews since there are so many and I'm assuming you've edited since then. So sorry if I repeat anything. Austin ...

Yay, 700! I guess ultraviolet beat me to the first review though. xD Shucks. Next time, ultraviolet! Next time... :smt003 Also, great job everyone! This was definitely my favorite review ...

Hey there! First of all, at the beginning of this, I thought the MC was a man. I realized later that it wasn't, but I still couldn't help imagining her ...