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Re: 1st and 3rd person - Both?
Well basically he has a split personality, where his other half is like a voice in his head that can take control of him at certain times. And this person ...
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Re: 1st and 3rd person - Both?
OK, I'll try it. :) I've just never seen that done, so I was wondering if there was any specific reason not to, or if people just thought it was ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: The Mentally Unsound
Well I think they use straight jackets for when a person causes self harm. I could be wrong; I am in no way an expert. Anyways, thanks for the help. ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: The Mentally Unsound
OK, so I have a character that is--you guessed it!--mentally unsound. My question is in insane asylums, or mental illness hospital, how much does it take to get put in ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones DT
She was one of the one's who got the shot from the scientists, right? Well maybe the shot was some sort of illness carrier--or did SOMETHING--and she's the first one ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones DT
*blushes* guilty. But I do love this sb. It's the only one I've entered that has really taken off. I can't believe how far it's gotten. It's amazing. I want ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: 1st and 3rd person - Both?
OK, so for my story The Ringbearers, there is a girl narrating it to everyone, so obviously it is 3rd person. Which is working fine, and as I planned. But ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones DT
OOO!!!! Sorry... I'm easily excited.... Maybe it could be like a halloween ball and they all got dressed up in gowns and tuxes, but with WINGS. Although where they'd get ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones
Blake "You have changed, but... I don't know." I looked down, backed up against the wall of the hallway we were in, and slid to the ground. Why did I ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones
Blake Did they not get the situation we were in? We were on the run. Sure, we had a stop, ate, got cleaned up, but our lives weren't normal. And ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones
Blake Inside I was absolutely fuming. What the heck was he doing? Hair, tattoo, piercing! OK, I had to admit the hair was him, and the tattoo was pretty awesome--though ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones
Blake After walking around and glancing at all the stores--none of them held my interest enough to actually enter them--I made my way to the food court. Ellie, Ashton, and ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: The Dreamkeepers: Chapter 4
Hi! I really like this! Which I've said before... but. Anyways, grammar wise, I didn't notice anything in the read through, so I'm not going to bother doing the whole ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones
Blake "I've been having SOME fun." I thought back to when we were kissing in the dark store. "Oh yeah," said Michel. "When." No way was I going to admit ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Winged Ones
Blake "No," I said. "We don't have time." Too late. Some heavily pierced and tattooed guy walked up to us. "Come on little missy. At least have a look around." ...
Jun 17, 2010
