ultraviolet

No prob. Anytime. :)

OK, so I edited it. I wan wondering if any of you would reread it? You don't have to review or anything; I just want to know if it's better.

*pats austenite's head comfortingly* Poor, poor austenite. Here, want a cookie? *gives cookie*

Thanks, for the reviews guys. :) They're great. I'll do another edit later tonight when I have more time. Skins, can I just say that you kind of freaked me ...

But this is only part one, right? I'm assuming that's why you have a one in parentheses in the title. Anyways, on to the review! Red = Corrections Blue = ...

Call up Kaida and Talen of course. ~Arrisa I have a board. I'll just ride across. ~Penelope Ditto the board. ~James If they came across an escaped psycho killer with ...

YOU CAN DO IT! OK, now that I'm done with my moral supporting ( :P ) I'll get to myself. I THINK I'm between 2,500 and 3,000 words. But, really, ...

Hi Zan! Will you please review the first chapter of my new novel? Please and thank you! Anti Amnesia - Chapter 1

Hey Skins! Fancy seeing you here. ;) Anyways, down to business. Will you review the first chapter of my new novel? Pretty please with a cherry on top! Here's the ...

I can recite the alphabet backwards, easily, I've practiced so much. :P I've been able to for a while now. (I know, I'm a nerd and proud of it.)

Oh yeah? Says who?! Who are you to tell me I have no pancake mix?! I just so happen to have pancake mix RIGHT HERE! *pulls a box of pancake ...

'Ello there! Looks like I'll be your review this fine evening! :) Red = Corrections Blue = Things I like Bold = Comments Remember, remember, the fifth of November... I ...

This reminds me of a song my brother--25 years old--made up. The lyrics change frequently, but it's always sung opera style, and there is always a reference to the "throne ...

'Kay, so I edited it. Better?

Thanks, Wario. :) Glad you like it. And believe me, I do have an epic plot planned out. (At least I think it's epic.) I'll check back later when I ...