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Re: Leave Out All The Rest *contest entry*
Sarg, are you saying that I should make the dream sequence shorter, or that I should make the rest longer? I'm rewriting as I speak, but I was wondering which ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: Leave Out All The Rest *contest entry*
Thanks for the reviews guys. I see how it's not good, now. I'm going to fix it. Sarg- as for it being a dream, I can't really help that. It's ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: Zan-tastic Free Reviews (Open!)
Hi! I was wondering if you could review Leave Out All The Rest for me. Pretty please, with a cherry on top? :P
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: Classy Reviews [open]
Can you review Leave Out All The Rest , please?
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Need A Review? (Updated)
Can you review Leave Out All The Rest for me? Thanksies! :D
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Reviews, glorious reviews... (contest)
Hi! Can you review Leave Out All The Rest for me? Thanksies!!
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Leave Out All The Rest *contest entry*
This is based on the song, Leave Out All The Rest, by Linkin Park. Here's a link to the video and here's to the lyrics . “Pick up, Will, please, ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: ultraviolet's utopia of ultimate evaluations (Closed)
Hey, guys, sorry I haven't been doing these. My mind's been really fogged lately, and writer's block has overtaken me. Like, big time. I can't even write a simple review; ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Title Feedback
I'd say it's about a girl who's always been a bit different. People in her life make fun of her and no one truly understands her. Perhaps she tries to ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Drinking This Rum (A "Cleaning This Gun" Parody)
(In case you can't tell, this is about pirates...) [Verse 1:] In my journey for independence, All my crew, they were in attendance, But now they’re lost. I can’t begin ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Pieces of a Storm
I have one little nitpick: I want to run around in it, sing in it, dance in it. I want to shout – no, yell , - no scream! Other ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games - Done
Why are we all 14 year old girls?
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: The Hunger Games - Done
Name: Acacia Lane Age: 14 Gender: Girl District: 11 Appearance/Picture: History: Acacia's family is very poor. She has three little sisters and a little brother. She had a brother, Red, ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Am I too cruel to my characters?
Thanks for the advice guys. :) These things are for the plot; without these things my characters wouldn't develop the way they need to. And as for the operation, it's ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Am I too cruel to my characters?
I am determined in my books to have at least one main person die. Lots of people are going to get seriously injured. One person is going to be stuck ...
Aug 12, 2010
