ultraviolet

Acacia Lane The girl yanked the lever harder, so hard it broke off. The chairlift started going faster, faster, I thought, than it was made to. It pulled me up ...

Jaden We stop talking. Then, I need us to talk. I can't stand the silence any longer. I don't know why; it's not like I've been living a very exciting, ...

Jianna Kris "A doctor?" I asked. "Perfect. That is perfect, right?" I looked to Mothe--Hartanna. "Yes," Hartanna agreed. "All we have to do is go to the town you lived ...

Jianna Kris They would find us. We had been flying in the night sky for hours and had covered hundreds of miles and left them behind on the ground, but ...

Hi! I'm pretty sure that I already said this on your blog post, but I'll say it again. Welcome! YWS is a great website. :D I've only been a member ...

'Ello! ultraviolet here. :D Welcome to YWS! We are a pretty amazing community. Everyone here I've met so far has been friendly, and I've been here for months. :) There's ...

First, even though this is a poem, punctuation is still very important. For capitalization, you can either capitalize every line, or the beginning of every sentence. I've seen it both ...

Sure. We can just add in the others when they're ready. After I finish a review I'm doing, I'll make the first post. :)

Dreamy115 Your left handed, aren't you!? :wink: Unless if the "Test" is a fake! :shock: Um... ambidextrous. I can write equally well with both hands. Lucky! My left hand writing ...

Luna I backed up slowly, one tiny step at a time, until me and France were back to back. The three other dolls circled us, and one walked up to ...

Okay, I'll bite. Name: Kree Gender: Girl Age (any age, but keep it believable.): 18 Agency (The Cliches, or the 'Rival Agency): Rival Agency (is "Excalibur's Bullet" an okay name? ...

Better. It's good. Could still use some more descriptions, but it is better. Also, I didn't know that you were making another part before, so that's some of the reason ...

It's better, it gives us more of an idea of what's going on and the urgentness of the situation. Still, I think you could expand on this more. It still ...

I have a few questions: One, are the rival agency people cliches, or just regular assassins? Two, If they are regular, How exactly would you define a "normal assassin"? I ...

Oh... sorry. I may still make a character, but I might not. :|