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Re: Shoulder The Veil
Shoulder the veil, the thin lacy shroud, hiding my face from the many on-viewers; carry it away on a white horse at sunset; kiss it so sweetly, like an elegant ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Novel Follower -Gone Fishing; Be Back Soon-
Please Read: Okay, I know I'm incredibly behind. Sure, I could say I've been busy and that most of my free time has been taken up by my own writing, ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Red Amidst Black - Part 1
This is my entry for the Writer's Roulette contest. I'm putting my genre and element in a spoiler at the bottom. I spent the first seventeen years of my life ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Bleu Celeste - Part 2
Just so you know, I have written this review out for you - I just wrote it in a notebook. Don't ask why. Just, sometimes things are easier to write ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Bleu Celeste - Part 1
Hey there, Cal! Until you revise this, I'm not going to do a whole, complete nitpick thing, because you could change half the things. Instead, I'll nitpick recurring problems. “Hello?” ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: The member above me is awesome because...
You're awesome because you joined less than a month ago.
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: A Word From
Yet another thing written a while back, but recently dug up. Enjoy. Don’t touch me. Don’t even look at me. There’s blood on my hands. It’s wet. It’s red. It ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Nothing Can Touch Me
I wrote this a while ago, maybe more than a year. I don't really remember. Normally I don't really like things I wrote so long ago, but I sort of ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: The member above me is awesome because...
You're awesome because you're a stationary addict.
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-part 4
Hey there, modern! Adonis awkwardly patted her arm, not knowing what to do . He thought about leaving her alone, but the fragile, lost look in Calypso's eyes changed his ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-Part 3
Hey there! Okay, so I have a few things off about this chapter. 1. They mention how their think mortal-Calpyso is immortal-Calypso because she's a pretty Greek girl about the ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-part 2
Hey there! Okay, so first off, we get that this is going to be heavily into Greek mythology - but Calypso and Cerberus? I didn't mention anything last chapter because ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: small girl, little legs
So, this is just something I wrote up quick, not really sure why. I'm generally not that much for poetry, and I'm definitely not that great at it, so any ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: The member above me is awesome because...
You're awesome for having more reviews than me.
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Honor's Gauntlet (1.2)
Hey there! Sorry it's taken me so long to get here. I blame my short attention span. Like seriously, I read it over a week ago, and I've come back ...
May 31, 2011
