ultraviolet

First, WOW! It looks like it was a lot of fun! Matthew West... He's the one who does "Through the Motions," or "Motions," or something like that? I love that ...

Hi! ultraviolet here! Okay, so for the most part, I like this. There are a couple of flow-breaking lines I've found, though. Fire. I convulse as it pounds. Can I ...

Acacia Lane I led Ivan into the recording studio, so we could talk strategy. The thing was, he gave me his apple. Stupid move, but very, very smart. It showed ...

Jeremy is dead. I'm going to post that in my next post.

Bolt and Skins. I know it's been said, but when you start spamming each other's walls with so many random, untrue facts, you know it's serious. ;)

Snoink, I like the way you think. *pushes pig stickers across table* Now, let's talk. :smt047

Acacia Lane I woke up to sun light and the sound of a splash. Considering how tired I was, I was fairly certain that I hadn't slept more than a ...

Yeah, I kinda figured that. :P

Socky? :P

Though they could just assign a mod to screen the pics. Still, I can see where they don't want to go through the trouble, especially if people are constantly changing ...

Thanks for the reviews! Skins, I fixed all of the grammar mistakes. As for the "All I wanted to do was die," when I was really sick, I felt awful. ...

Blake Why was everyone being to calm, so happy? Sure, I was ecstatic to be on the island, but didn't anyone realize what this meant? Didn't they remember who put ...

You get cocoa krispies. ~insert coin~

I like this. It's nice and the words are well chosen. I do feel that so much more depth and meaning could be brought to it if you added even ...

~This is for Skins' opening lines contest. Also, this isn't meant to be descriptive or anything, simply a girl telling her feelings in a vague way. Still, all comments are ...