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Why, hello there! So, overall, lovely story, lovely writing. However, there are a few things I have questions about (though they may be sorted out in the next part; I'll ...

Hey there! Seeing as this has no feedback, here I am, inadequately helpful as ever. First of all, let me just say that the writing here is beautiful. Eloquent, intoxicating, ...

Hey there, Ranger! Looks like you've got no reviews, so here I am. For the most of it, this is done well; nice voice, descriptions, lovely pacing. But there were ...

Dare I go against another reviewer? Yes, there's not a lot going on here, but since the writing itself is so beautiful, I think it works. It has a dreamy, ...

You're awesome because you're lucky.

Hey! First of all, this is really good, sixth grade or otherwise. I can only imagine how you'd improved since then. Though, I do have a couple of comments on ...

Ells, you look so cute! Here's me, from Father's Day:

Can you take a look at The Tattoo Engineer - 2.1 (Revised) ? I have a summary at the top so you shouldn't have to look at the past two ...

So, once again, I want to commend you on your dialogue. But instead of how it transmits information, just it in general. You don't have a lot of dialogue tags ...

Okay, so I want to commend you on a couple things. First of all, I like the direction this is taking me. It's good. I'm interesting in seeing what happens ...

A while ago, I changed the name of my novel "The Deserter" to "The Tattoo Engineer" when revising. Now, on the novel page, I can't get rid of the old ...

JOIN THE CLUB. =3 Summary: Adah Edric, a banished princess, has been staying at a neighboring country under a fake name. Her brother, who's just taken up the throne, requests ...

Don't ask. A girl died today. They called her Alanis Mickayla Calliope Acacia de Corio, though she wished they wouldn't. She just wanted to be called Teshi. If you wanted ...

YOUR STORY IS ABOUT A FREELANCE WRITER ON FLIGHT 132 SPENDING MONEY. My perfect drink has all the mixings of life. It started when I was twelve and I found ...

Fluff.