ultraviolet

Banned for making a lame joke.

Banned because I have to do History.

You can throw me in a dirty pot; make me into a boiling stew; Take away this A. It will help with the flow. But the pain I give myself ...

Hi, there! Her dress of blue silk to her knees, Did you mean, "Her dress of blue silk hung to her knees"? She walked like a swan as she made ...

I sprang into the fight, wildly swinging my sword with adrenaline before I regained control of myself. I pulled my adrenaline under control and swung my sword at a short ...

This photograph m that I kept at heart. But alas, I never had the chance, from my camera, I fell for you, Something I need to mention is your vocabulary. ...

As a short little piece, this is nice, but I think you could make this even better. You talk about missiles and dangers and how Wonderland would be safer. I ...

Hi there! :) “Screech!” It's a sound, not dialogue. Take away the quotation marks and italicize it. The ear-splitting sound of mutilated metal and shattering glass Because, like "shattering", it's

Like storiesandsuch said, good idea, but worded a little awkwardly. Silencing the imagination is the crue l lest thing one can do to another. This sounds... wrong. "Silencing the imagination" ...

Banned because I found a cool pic thingy.

Banned for starting it!

Banned because you don't know you've been banned for that before (which you have).

Talk about flash fiction. xD Her long black curls trail ed behind like a wisp of smoke from a fire for a moment before disappearing like the rest of her. ...

Banned for banning without reason.

Banned because your avvie makes me think you're a girl.