ultraviolet

Here to review as requested! To start, nitpicks. There she goes, The golden girl , The one , my lover's holding . How is the MC's lover holding the golden ...

~Why is every one of these about me about my avvie? :P ~ Known for having an awesomely shaded avvie.

For having a username with the most wicked awesome utensil ever in it.

Name: Keed Sears Age: 17 Parents: Ares and Poppy Sears Appearance: She's not short, but she's not tall either. Her clothing style is a mix of country and punk, with ...

You get a picture of yourself that says CREEPER. ~insert coin~

Banned for invading our wall wars without knowing I was the one that brought you into it.

You get a slip of paper that says, "Peanut Butter sucks. Get a life. I hear they sell 'em on ebay now." ~insert coin~

Hey! I want to review this, but is there any way you could attach this in a different format? I don't have Microsoft Word (I use Works) so the most ...

For sounding like Fizzle.

I call an Ares girl.

Known for having a heck of a lot of points. xD

Hi! So, I'm not going to nitpick because I don't feel I can. I mean, there are spots I could point out, but I think that would ruin this for ...

I know this is probably a stupid question, but are there any preferred ways to critique on here? A certain format? Like, on chapter-by-chapter novels, people usually nitpick, then go ...

'Ello, there, ultraviolet here!

Banned for always being "Hidden."