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Hi! to get so soaked, my bones become waterlogged. Do either "to get so soaked that my bones become waterlogged," or "to get so soaked, to have my bones become ...

8/10 Because purple is an awesome color and, though I've never heard that song, I like it.

Thanks for the advice. :) But apparently the author hasn't been on in like forever, so I'm not really sure the point in reviewing it... :/

Hey! So, what I noticed most about this was the lack of description. For starters, when you brought out her friends. We didn't get any information - physical, personal - ...

Hi! The next morning, the child ' s family woke to an empty bed. Add this apostrophe. After several hours of searching, T he father of the girl made a ...

Hi, ultraviolet here.

I guess so. I mean, if no one's posting and has lost interest....

Always, always, always avoid using the passive voice. And write about what you know; how're you going to publish a novel on the war in Afghanistan if you've never even ...

Thanks. :) I'll look into some of that stuff. (And as for #3... well, I'm 13 and don't like science. Plus, I'm not the brightest crayon in the box. xD ...

Smoothies in fake coconut cups with umbrella straws. Go figure.

Hey, so, the novel I'm working on has a lot of changes in weather from current day. (It's post-apocalyptic.) I have a few questions that I would love to get ...

You get bunches and bunches of tomatoes. -inserts coin-

Ilaina Mick When I woke up it was light out, but it was a morning light, with dew on the ground not yet dried and the air was both clean ...

...when you don't know ALL of this (^^) and you are so tempted to go look all of this up and burn it into your brain, but you don't because ...

~I know, I suck for taking so long. Thing's have been kind of hectic, plus, huge writers block every one of the trillions of times I look at this thread. ...