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Okay, I am not an artist, but I am a lover of Captain Jack Sparrow, so I shall try to help. :) 1. The nose. This is the first off ...

I like Scribbled and Desk. I'm not a big fan of the Gab, or the ones like that, probably because they don't really have to do with writing. They'd be ...

Motivation is a key thing in writing. If the characters don’t have a reason to be doing something, then why are they doing it? If your character doesn’t have a ...

Weapons AND violet eyes? This officially rocks! xD

This is what happens when I procrastinate for NaNo. 'Tis not pretty, I know. Poor, pitiful pitcher. I wonder, do you have senses? I hope you can’t taste - there ...

Thanks, guys. And I think I'll come back to this, fix it up a little, but not until after NaNoWriMo. It's just not worth the time while I desperately try ...

They found your body today. It was floating along Our river, lodged between a rock and a hard place. The hard place was the rusty metal bridge I refused to ...

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Hi! Here to review for you. :) Okay, so on the "7 Simple Rules For Stronger Prose" how people were telling you things like "more description" and stuff, but weren't ...

That's what I meant by "large amount." And you're right; balance is key. With description, action, thoughts, dialogue, anything. Even sentence structure; repetition is boring, unless done in an intrig

A lot of my dislike of continual "saids" stems from how it sounds when read, which is really grating to me. "Said" can be annoying. In fact, any large amount ...

I wanted something that had to do with the book I was writing... which is now kind of on hold. Anyway, my person could see invisible light, and the first ...

The cancer gene hasn't been discovered yet because it was a mutant result of exposure to toxic chemicals.

Could we maybe try to start this up again after November's over? NaNo's taking over my life.

This is for retrodisco666's contest . Basically, it has to be a sonnet not about some form of love. On October 31st, so speckled with lore of monsters, of demons, ...