ultraviolet

Congrats! It's awesome to see people who've been around since practically the beginning and who still venture over regularly. :D *joins conga* Da, da da da, da, da!

This is pretty good. The first four lines flow really well, with a nice rhythm, but I felt the lines after that was lagging. Probably because of this line: I ...

I disagree with Justagirl - the "Dark and Deadly" times are what this piece is about. I found it perfectly fine to have in there. So I'm not really good ...

Hey, are those two paragraphs more easy to read now? I entered in some commas, trying to separate things that I sort of grouped together. Is it better this way, ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I'll fix all the typos, and maybe space out those paragraphs. Oh, and thanks on the whole "dying" thing - I never know which to ...

Hey, if it's not too much trouble, would you mind checking out the revised version? Thanks. :)

They found your body today. It was floating along our river, below the rusty metal bridge I refused to walk on because I was sure a single step would bring ...

About the 1st Person left in there, I only did it quickly before, but now I read through and I think I got it all. And about the confused part ...

Thanks for the reviews! canislupis>> You said how it doesn't make sense that she's saying that... I think I'll change this to third person, so that the narrator does have ...

Cal (Calligraphy) You got me started in writing more than a year ago, and because of your supportive prodding (*coughnaggingcough*) I've gone farther in writing than I could have otherwise. ...

Hi! First, I just want to say that this is really good. I can't really find much to comment on, but I did feel a bit of rhythm lapse in ...

Personally, I like the battery one. I think it's the most original. After all, how many pictures of batteries do you see, especially ones with meaning? While everything else is ...

This is for Trident's Three-Pronged Contest. My things to incorporate are a) a lawn gnome, b) duct-taping an article of clothing, and c) a silver penny. Critique as harsh as ...

Pink! I'z here to reviews you! 1. His eyes. Not because they're particularly bad, but because they need more definition. In the movies, he had smudgy eyeliner, mostly on the ...

Operator, to tourists in back: And that, passengers, is why you should never let your tour guide drive a crane into a lake.