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JOIN THE CLUB =3 Summary: Adah Edric, a once-banished princess, has returned home to train as a soldier in an all-men army. Upon arrival, she attends a feast where an ...

Also, somethings I do are: I listen to a bunch of different songs, trying to find one that speaks to me, inspires me, shows me a character, or plot, or ...

Um, I thought we didn't get our powers until we found our rings and met up with everyone in the woods...?

Hey there! Okay, so at the beginning of this, everything feels very... misty. Transparent, almost, like a ghost; intangible; indirect. We get descriptions of the place, but it's still hard ...

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Rachey! Here I am, hopefully your first reviewer of the evening (though, by the time I finish this, I'm not sure I will be). First of all, I was a ...

Name: Avril Calliope Age (14-19): 18 Sex: Female Appearance (written and a picture): She has long, wavy, dark auburn-red hair, very pale skin, and gray-green eyes. She's always perfectly manicured ...

Hey there, dasiamarie! Or maybe they did. I'm not sure exactly what you mean by this. I'd add onto the sentence, make your meaning clear; just a few more words ...

1 and 2: I don't really have complaints on these. They're really good, though I can't say how they look compared to the original. My only comment would be the ...

Hey there! Okay, so obviously you have more words that you can use - I'd like to see you dig deeper into this. When I first read of the wedding, ...

Hey there! I don't normally quote the whole work to make comments, but seeing as this is fairly short and there are some grammar issues I want to take care ...

Hey there! I haven't read the previous chapters, so this is going to be mostly execution reviewing. Something I noticed is that you're very good at pacing. Even at the ...

Hey there, Kaitlin! Since it appears you've gotten no reviews, here I am. When she was younger, she opened new books to break their backs, letting the spines crack beneath ...

Hey there! I noticed that occasionally you have sentences that are messed up in some way - mostly run-ons - but nothing major, nothing really repeating, so I'm not going ...

Hey there, High! Fellow redman here to review. 8) First of all, can I just say that I love how Kate's real name is Kathryn? 'Cause that's my name! Even ...