ultraviolet

Great characters guys. Keep it up. :) Edit: I've decided to add History to the character profiles, so if you'll update the profiles, that'd be great.

I'm a little north of the Cornucopia, in an apartment. After the butterflies leave, Marco's going out to look for you guys.

Name: Claira Memmer Age: 16 Gender: Female Appearance/Picture: Personality: Is quiet, not necessarily out of shyness, though she can be shy when she wants to be. She sort of blends ...

The plot is simple: You wake up in the cafeteria of an abandoned concrete prison. The electricity doesn't work. Outside, you are in the middle of the wilderness, no civilization ...

And to answer your other question, no, you don't have to write a million words. And how would you even know if you had, given all that we write in ...

Hey there, Orinette. :) Kael knew from the moment his fingers touched Aeron’s neck that he was going to kill him. Like Ranger said, I was confused about who was ...

Hey there! Okay, to follow up Spork, my first point is about Lauren. Earlier you showed us she was drunk - like, drunk drunk. Could barely even walk. Now she ...

Okay, so I'm going to be blunt. A lot of this was info dumping. Mind you, it was actually pretty interesting, but info dumping nonetheless. First off, Mr. Sinclair way ...

Okay, so I have a couple things about this. One, I was confused about how she was seeing this. You said it like she was watching/was her mom, but it ...

Okay, so my main thing with this is, it doesn't really seem to match up with the chapter before it. I get the time difference is there, but 1, I'd ...

Hi! Here to review as requested. :D A warm light illuminated the office, stemming both from the gently smoldering fireplace and the tinted electrical light above. As the first line ...

Hey, would you mind taking a look at Colors ? It's mine and 322sivart's entry to the Poetry Pairs contest thing, and we kinda need all the help me can ...

Death

Hey there! “Come on, man, you have got to go with her.” This confused me. At first it sounded like he was convincing him to go out with Laurie, but ...

Um... I think there's more than one? Let's just say my character didn't see the others, okay?