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Re: Saying what needs to be said.
And to add to little, as us once-newer members get better, we become better reviewers, taking the place of the members that leave. It's a cycle. There are never going ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Angels - Chapter 3
Hey, Orinette! So, this is pretty long, so sorry if this ends up being a short review - ironic of me to say, but there is a method to my ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Mod Thing
I'm not going to rant/defend the site and Nate, though I could, very easily. Instead, I have a few questions. All of your suggestions for change involve change of leadership ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Saying what needs to be said.
Definitely! It sounds cliched and melodramatic, but without you guys there would be no YWS. You keep it running, and each of us either is or ought to be eternally ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Survive Them - Started, Accepting
Oh, sorry, I knew that. *smacks head* Claira Memmer This girl... was out there. But there was something about her that I liked - I had no idea what it ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Survive Them - Started, Accepting
Note: There's no electricity in the prison (I don't know if I mentioned that) so there would be no neon lights. Claira Memmer I groaned. How had my bed become ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Help with a name
If you're looking for original names, please don't use Sunshine or Nova. They're nice enough names, by themselves, but original? They've been used too many times when people are trying ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Poetry Duel [Watch out for pointy objects]
How dare you Stand up against the crowd Scream in the silence Curse out the priest How dare you Smile as you're mutilated Sing as you're held captive Dream as ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Survive Them - Started, Accepting
Lol, it's totally fine. Let's declare this officially started. :)
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader (Prologue)
Hi there! Sorry it's taken so long to get to this. First off, I like the idea of the masked hero. Definitely has the potential to be something I'd pick ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 1 (OUTDATED)
Thanks for all the reviews. You pinpointed all the things I didn't like about this, and now I know how to fix them! *beams* And actually, bouncing off each other ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]
Hey canis! Mind checking out this ? It's sci fi, but not star-trekky, and from the first chapter you can probably not even tell it's sci fi. Thanks if you ...
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
Hey borntobe! Would you mind reviewing this ? It's Science Fiction, but not glaringly so, especially not yet, and I don't want feedback on the sci fi part - just ...
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
Hey Zila! Mind reviewing this for me? The Deserter - Chapter 1 . Thanks in advance. :D loveness, ultraviolet
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Angels - Chapter 2
Hey there! Okay, so the first thing that I thought when I read this was that the girl was about nine or ten. Maybe eleven. I don't know why exactly; ...
Mar 25, 2011
