ultraviolet

Shade- How funny! And yes, I realized the present/past tense issue. I am paying special attention to this now, and am going to double and triple and so on check ...

Thanks guys. :) You know, it was fun to write this, but I would have nothing to write about. I don't read romance, so I could not come up with ...

Hi! overall I loved it, but you didn't put any lines between the paragraphs--or even indent spaces at the start of one. I loved the writing, but that made it ...

I loved it. :D I would seriously appreciate it if you would PM me when the next chapter's done. Even on a site like this it's hard to find GOOD ...

Jasminebells. I'm not surprised that this reminded you of "I'd lie" by Taylor Swift. That's what originally gave me the idea. And as for the shortness of it all, yes, ...

You know Lilicia, your so right. Thanks for helping me pick out the flaws. :smt003 Does this description of Nancy seem better? Realistic? Input appreciated. And you like the ending? ...

Thanks Zibbie! Now that you bring it up, your suggestions do make it better. How do you like this start? Any better? I appreciate you taking the time to comment. ...

My dreams have always made my life difficult. They always seem so real. Not so real that when I wake up I’m like “Crap! I didn’t just meet Taylor Lautner?” ...

This was SERIOUSLY FUNNY!!! Normally when I think something like this is funny, I laugh on the inside. But when I read this I almost couldn't because I am on ...

I LOVED IT! Though Spoink is right, ninjas and explosions and whatever else would have been wicked. But I like how you kept it positive until Rabbity died. If I ...

Hi. Well, I'm a HUGE Harry Potter fan and I have to say, this is pretty hilarious. To counter Navita, I think it's funny BECAUSE it's so this-could-never-happen-in-a-million-years. Oh, and ...

Dear diary, Today is a day like no other. Today, fish don’t swim. Today, birds don’t fly. And today, hearts don’t beat. Today, fish plunge into the pristine depths of ...

Chelarose, Overall, I loved it! :) The only thing that bugged me was the paragraphs. Personally, I prefer writing with smaller paragraphs than you used. About halfway through longer ones, ...