ultraviolet

Hi! Skins, a few things: First, I fixed the grammar errors you pointed out. Second, the musician comes in later. I didn't find it totally relevant to point him out ...

A.S., just to let you know, you can edit instead of reposting in the comments. And yes, I am the mastermind behind the EXTREMELY wonderful name. Did I mention I ...

I assumed the park where they told me to meet them was Lions Park. No way was I going to search the entire Interstate Park for those freaks. The Interstate ...

Actually, I kind of like the ending. It makes me want to know where Eric goes, what he does. I'm assuming his uncle doesn't know he dropped school. That makes ...

Hey! I like it. :) You do kind of show not tell, though. I can't really complain much; I tend to do this a lot too. Anyways, I was entertained ...

Hi! OK, so I'm not really in the nit-picking mood. But BondGirl, I was thinking that as I read. Righty-tighty, lefty-loosey. Other than that, I really liked it. I want ...

Hey, I was wondering if you wanted to review something for me? I've already had Skins review it, but, you know, different opinions can help. Plus, no one's perfect. Anyways, ...

I just want to say one thing: about the tourist in the floral print shirt, it's really sad. That's my dad when we visit florida and disneyworld and stuff. I'm ...

Skins, thanks for reviewing! You're right, tenses are my weakness. I've been putting extra emphasis into perfecting those, though. I'll tell you as soon as Part 3 is out. Shouldn't ...

Hi! Would you mind reviewing the first two parts to this story I'm writing? It's called "My life as a human dreamcatcher." I'm currently working on the third. Thanks! Part ...

Hey. About the dolls, if you've ever been to Disneyworld, there is a ride called "a small world after all." Basically, there are these dolls dressed up in outfits from ...

Hi! I liked it. I was going to nitpick, but then I saw that KD already did. She covered all the things that I noticed, so all I have to ...

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This looks really good! I was wondering how you were going to do the whole doll thing, but this works out pretty perfectly. My only thing is it was kind ...

This is beautiful! When you mentioned flyleaf I immediately went to youtube to look up the song, and this is just a perfect description. I really like flyleaf. I got ...