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Re: Black Rabbit Prologue
Hey there! So, I'm not going to take a ton of time here, just focus on a couple little things that popped out to me. First off, the hole Brown ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: He said, She said.
To wrap up what everyone's said (no pun intended), let me just say that there are a lot of great techniques and things available to use, all of which are ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Hi
I vote this be 1) Locked -or- 2) Stickied and Locked -or- 3) Moved to a hidden board -or- 4) Moved to the unending blog if anyone can find it ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Hello every one
Hey there! Welcome to the site. =D As I'm sure you've found out, meeting new people here is easy and fun. Everyone's super friendly and encouraging. This is a great ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Liar Game Chapter 1
Hey there! Well, first off, since this is a fan faction, technically you have to put it under Fan Fiction, otherwise it's considered plagiarism, I think. Also, it's not a ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Hello!
Hey ilyah! First off, welcome to the site! There are tons of awesome, friendly people here, so if you ever have any questions, there are a ton of people who ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-part one
Hey there! First off, I have to say, I really like this. Good premise, good voice. The first paragraph really hooked me. Probably the biggest problem here is that you ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chap. 5
What can I say? I love this. I'd read it. In fact, there have been times lately when I've thought while reading other books that I'd rather read this. The ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chap. 4
Hey there! Okay, so as always, this is for the most part really good. I'm not going to go line-by-line, because those get tedious and you don't really need it ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Warriors: Plain and Simple
Hey, so, like they said, this is really short. Because of this, it's really hard to get a feel for the writing. I'd tell you ways to fill this out, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Consultants: Chapter I
Hey there. So, going out on a limb, I'm gonna hafta disagree with borntobe. Sure, not a lot happens, but that doesn't mean that it's entirely bad. You've got a ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 3, Part 2 (OUTDATED)
JOIN THE CLUB =3 Summary: Adah Edric, a banished princess, returns home to train as a soldier, and eventually military adviser, once her brother assumes the throne. After returning to ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 3, Part 1 (OUTDATED)
JOIN THE CLUB =3 Summary: Adah Edric, a banished princess, returns home to train as a soldier, and eventually military adviser, once her brother assumes the throne. She has spent ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Masquerader Chap. 3
Hey there! Okay, so first of all, I'm a little confused about all of the political stuff. The Duritian army is invading, taking over... yet the Maliean queen is still ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chap. 2
Hey there! *isn't even going to mention how much Reviewer's Block she's had to put this off so long... >.>* *cough* Anywho! On to the review. The room was dark ...
Apr 29, 2011
