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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Black Rabbit Prologue

    Hey there! So, I'm not going to take a ton of time here, just focus on a couple little things that popped out to me. First off, the hole Brown ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: He said, She said.

    To wrap up what everyone's said (no pun intended), let me just say that there are a lot of great techniques and things available to use, all of which are ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi

    I vote this be 1) Locked -or- 2) Stickied and Locked -or- 3) Moved to a hidden board -or- 4) Moved to the unending blog if anyone can find it ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello every one

    Hey there! Welcome to the site. =D As I'm sure you've found out, meeting new people here is easy and fun. Everyone's super friendly and encouraging. This is a great ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Liar Game Chapter 1

    Hey there! Well, first off, since this is a fan faction, technically you have to put it under Fan Fiction, otherwise it's considered plagiarism, I think. Also, it's not a ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello!

    Hey ilyah! First off, welcome to the site! There are tons of awesome, friendly people here, so if you ever have any questions, there are a ton of people who ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ogygia-part one

    Hey there! First off, I have to say, I really like this. Good premise, good voice. The first paragraph really hooked me. Probably the biggest problem here is that you ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Masquerader Chap. 5

    What can I say? I love this. I'd read it. In fact, there have been times lately when I've thought while reading other books that I'd rather read this. The ...

    May 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Masquerader Chap. 4

    Hey there! Okay, so as always, this is for the most part really good. I'm not going to go line-by-line, because those get tedious and you don't really need it ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Warriors: Plain and Simple

    Hey, so, like they said, this is really short. Because of this, it's really hard to get a feel for the writing. I'd tell you ways to fill this out, ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Consultants: Chapter I

    Hey there. So, going out on a limb, I'm gonna hafta disagree with borntobe. Sure, not a lot happens, but that doesn't mean that it's entirely bad. You've got a ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Deserter - Chapter 3, Part 2 (OUTDATED)

    JOIN THE CLUB =3 Summary: Adah Edric, a banished princess, returns home to train as a soldier, and eventually military adviser, once her brother assumes the throne. After returning to ...

    Apr 29, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Deserter - Chapter 3, Part 1 (OUTDATED)

    JOIN THE CLUB =3 Summary: Adah Edric, a banished princess, returns home to train as a soldier, and eventually military adviser, once her brother assumes the throne. She has spent ...

    Apr 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Masquerader Chap. 3

    Hey there! Okay, so first of all, I'm a little confused about all of the political stuff. The Duritian army is invading, taking over... yet the Maliean queen is still ...

    Apr 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Masquerader Chap. 2

    Hey there! *isn't even going to mention how much Reviewer's Block she's had to put this off so long... >.>* *cough* Anywho! On to the review. The room was dark ...

    Apr 29, 2011


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