ulala8

I enjoyed this poem. It's definitely not your best and it doesn't really seem to have your spark, but the message was really touching and I enjoyed reading it. However, ...

That's surely odd

"With child" is a phrase on its own, but thank you very much! It's so great to have a nice review!!

I attempted to lessen the amount of new words that I put into the story because I agree that it should be kept to a small amount. However, I had ...

It's not important, but do you think that it would be fun to say, "This person was just born from earth and fire, and he named the water "water"."?

I'm afraid that if I expand these character introductions we would have a frightfully boring expanse of a few chapters. We haven't gotten to see just how much of a ...

The two parts of each chapter are supposed to be distinct styles. The Past /is/ like folklore. It's in here to breathe into the readers the stories that the people ...

All of the spelling mistakes were intentional. Sodapop is a very poor speller as evident from his letter to Ponyboy and Johnny.

The only reason why I had the defining section is because the original book had a defining section at the bottom of the pages. There are supposed to be lines ...

Thank you! I just didn't particularly like this one. Sorry.

What makes it feel like a fanfiction?

Nvm. Sorry. I got two people mixed up.

I meant umber as in brown. I'll make corrections accordingly. Thank you~

I'll make it more clear. Hana was the first woman and she was the first Child of Light (but that's something for another time). However, humans began popping out of ...

Thank you. Can you post your story on my wall? I lost it.