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Un-bloody-believable. That's the first thing that popped to mind. This is SO good. There's obviously no plot or anything, but for a quick scene, this is great. You have all ...

Yikes! I didn't even notice that! Thanks...it's suppoased to read "Beauty on the outside is decided by what other people think looks nice."

Griffinkeeper: I believe the character is seventeen, not three. At the bottom of the text, it says that when she was three, her dad said the same thing to her, ...

It's in there--when her mom picks her up and puts her on the bed, she calls her "Isabelle". So, yeah, her name is Isabelle. Thanks for the comment. Someone might ...

Something a dug up from the bottom of my desk: *~*~*~*~*~*~* All of my life, I've been told I was beautiful, but I've never understood. When I was young, my ...

Like Sarah said, it's pretty unlikely one girl would survive (although you hint at others as well). There is no reason that she survived (perhaps for some reason she was ...

This is really well written, and very interesting. I would worry about the beginning; it's a bit hard to read. It's especially odd that Isabel is worried about shoe marks ...

Jigsaw and Adam101; Thanks; this is a prologue and I'm trying to make it sound less cliched (that's a big problem I have). This is definitedly NOT the end of ...

Perhaps she does. I really wanted to see Junebug but it wasn't playing anywhere near. I just really liked Rachel Weitz's performance, and compared to the other actors I had ...

It was a sunny autumn afternoon three years ago when Jonathan found out his father died. Jonathan was ten years old, and he had just played in a game of ...

I am very intrigued. It appears this Kent fellow has some sort of power with words. Very interesting. Some words of advice: be careful how you try to physically describe ...

Well, Rachel Weitz is the favorite for Supporting Actress--I really hopes she wins. This movie was excellent-I remember coming out of the movie theater feeling like I should DO something.

[pre]This was very good, you used good dramatic timing. For example, the one word paragraph "Poison." That alone actually drew me in to continue reading. Some things were a little ...