ubertrance

How I feel is a really great poem. I like the word choice and the form of the poem. As a poet it is always good to have great form ...

Hello there ubertrance! Welcome to the YWS! Well, a 3:1 means that you need to make three(3) reviews into someone else's work before you post a piece of your own ...

Your message is true (at least in my eyes) and I respect that. I enjoyed how you related the things to simple everyday life problems and situations. I liked the ...

Hi there! Let's see, your poem... Maybe seperate some things, they're kind of in a big blob. I liked the poem but since it's about a certain person, I feel ...

Thank you so very much, all criticism are welcome. It is good to see that you enjoy it. I know about my punctuation; I have never been great at it ...

May I ask Why is it a 3:1 ratio?

Hello one and all, I am Josh also known as ubertrance. I am 18. I live in Texas. I am a Lefty. I play a lot of video games. Mira ...

The feelings that are here today are simple Simple meaning true The factors of others attack and damage me But I keep on holding on by a thread Hoping to ...