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Well, I'm glad that people are enjoying reading this and thanks for the corrections. More is definately coming!!

Well, I think I'll call you Braden. How (maybe who) came up with misterwaffles, anyway! Its a really odd, but interestingly unique. I used to think I was a muture ...

I don't know. It just took me a while to get into it...... When I did though, I really enjoyed it. There's something bothering me though and I just can't ...

Hi Luke!! :lol: *smiles and waves*

Hi Kizzi, :D Welcome to YWS! I'm Thoko. I also like to write a variety of stuff, but fantasy is more my thing.

Well, I like it so far. Keep writing, I'm interested in what cames next. 8)

Chapter 1 Azzia woke with a start and almost leapt up before realizing where she was. She pushed the large, heavy book that she had been reading off her lap ...

I would definately like the views of more people, so everyone please read and tell me what you think!! PS Thanks for the corrections eleinasari

well, being you're sister, I can really relate to this poem!! :wink: Though, I must say, it doesn't really flow as well as some of you're other poetry. :? You ...

Hey Siphiwe Well I liked it. Keep it coming, sis!

Well, I joined YWS quite a while ago, but I guess that I never really introduced myself. :) My name is Thoko. I'm from Malawi (by my dad) and England ...

I've read you're story up to about chapter 10 and I love it! I can't wait to read the rest! I haven't really got anything to say on grammer and ...

Prologue Small ripples slowly glided up and down the beach, giving out little splash like sounds as they hit the crevices between the pebbles that ran the full length of ...

Simple, straightforward, to the point. Its not bad. Could have contained a bit more detail though

Stories of my heart I gave it away, and it was lost, I held it close, and it broke, If I locked it away, Would it be safe? If I ...