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Re: If I Had A...
Picks up Windex. Sprays person in the eyes, takes their wallet, and runs away. Buys a sweater. Sells Windex to Goodwill. Leaves sweater.
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Lifewish: Chapter One
Hey pen!!! :) I really really like this alot!!! As I can see there are no grammar issues, so that is great!!! I know many people have already told you ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Love To Be.
And i'd like to believe that this love will be. Okay in this line the i in i'd should be I'd So you aware you have a smile to die ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: A Perfect Image
Wow this poem is great!!!!!!! I love the title and hoe it relates so well to the poem. I can really relate to this poem, and honestly I think everybody ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: All Dressed in Black -A Ballad
Hmmmmmmm. I didn't really get the meaning of this. Just a little pointless. I didn't really like the introduction because I like to try to figure out things for myself. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: All Dressed in Black -A Ballad
Hmmmmmmm. I didn't really get the meaning of this. Just a little pointless. I didn't really like the introduction because I like to try to figure out things for myself. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Thorns & Roses [1.1]
I really like this story!! I can totally relate to what they are saying. I think you did a really awesome job on this i don't see any mistakes. The ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Journey To Adamaris
Hey pen! This is the story that i read at your house and i thought it was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! I somehow managed to read it all again today and i thaought ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Dance
This poem was just amazing!! The rhythm was absolutely perfect!! I love it, and can totally understand the meaning!! It was great, thanks for it!! Keep up the awesome work!! ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: As Much As I Love You?
This poem is really inspiring!!! I love it! Keep writing the amazing stuff!! HAPPY REVIEW DAY!!!
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Tell Me It's Okay
Hey!!! This poem is really good, and I can not find anything wrong with it. I can very well relate to this poem! It says alot of inspiring truth! Keep ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: As Much As I Love You?
Hi there BUDDY! Well, this poem looks great, and it is simply fabulous. Go Rob Pattinson!
Apr 30, 2011
