tswizzy22

Pretty good for a first poem I would say. I thought it got a little choppy at times, but I liked the scheme you were trying to go for. I ...

Thank you for the review! Glad you liked it!

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it.

Feel free to review something of mine if you want to earn points ;)

You should keep posting here! There seems to be a pretty active community.

Thank you so much for your feedback! I thought it was all pretty clear haha. I will try to have the next chapter up as soon as possible.