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Re: Sparks; Prologue
You say it's a prologue and as a prologue it's done its job! It drew me in, adding a little bit more and a little bit more sentence by sentence ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: And You Said I Couldn't Do It
I enjoyed this, although it was a short piece. I think it was short and simple like that and overall was a good example of how now is just that, ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Semi-conscious Reasoning (2. Average Day)
It looked like Dan was right. Working with another therapist was a living nightmare, especially when it was the likes of Weston Moore. While Dan was normally barely on time ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Establishing Image
You've definitely done your job drawing reader attention because I feel that I was interested within the first few lines and I wanted to continue on. By the time I ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Semi-conscious Reasoning (1. Dan)
Did another quick edit. Still finishing up the first draft so I can do all thorough editing after everything's churned out. Enjoy! The time was approaching five-o-clock, and Daniel Phillips ...
Sep 30, 2011
