tronks

Maybe my short story? cheers!

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5 more chapters to go. Editing is killing me alive! Thank you so much for all of your feedback and support thus far. Every single comment helps me to improve! ...

Getting my first draft completed! Something was amiss. Dan could conclude as much as he sat amongst the quiet of his room, having just seen a patient out. He wasn't ...

Hello there! This was a nice short piece, clearly very dramatic! I liked the writing as well, but some bits don't come across as intended and could be fixed up ...

Written for a speed contest with the topic "cereal" and although it's short I think it gets the point across. I'm getting too used to phone writing but whatever, enjoy! ...

A dystopian! I'm always interested in dystopian pieces. Your writing style has a lot of promise though there are issues here and there with, but first I'll give you my ...

Thank you for all the reviews so far! I'm trying to take everything in so that improvement can be made. Please keep the reviews coming so that I know what ...

This thing actually has a plot? I know, I'm shocked too. Please do enjoy!                  It was about a week until Dan was to see his newest patient, and he ...

I loved this work and the second one too. It was amazing and I really liked your character dan! He was exactly as you described him and I'm very glad ...

viewtopic.php?t=88275 Hello! If you have the time, thanks!

Your tenses often switch around throughout, and it was difficult to read at times. It has promise, it just needs a solid edit. I've edited the first paragraph so you ...

topic88275.html Hello there~ Reviews are very much appreciated!

I know little about poetry, so I can't really critique this. But I can give an overall review! I like the feeling that you've portrayed here. To me it feels ...

:o Aww, this was cute. It was nice to see that in the end the little event that changed our narrator so much was his father teaching him how to ...