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Re: ...Make Lemonade
Hahaha ! ! Awesome ! :D It was really fun and funny ! Nice work. And you're right your characters don't need any names. They are perfect. I loved your ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Vision And Veracity
Interesting theme ! Amazing Creativity ! :D I found the descriptions in the first paragraph beautiful. The last paragraph could be given a look though. I did find some mistakes. ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Lost In Mortality
Am obsessed with fairies, vampires or any mythological character. So naturally I loved the theme. I think you should expand the story. Tell us how she became a mortal. I ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Winter In Spring
Nice story ! I found the language poetic somehow ! :) The story is sweet. The characters are cute. :D Good job and keep writing.
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Nice poem .. Nice theme ! ! Brings out all the emotions of the dyslexic boy real well ! The poem reminds me of the bollywood movie Taare Zameen Par ...
Jun 24, 2011
