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  • Short Story » General, General Re: ...Make Lemonade

    Hahaha ! ! Awesome ! :D It was really fun and funny ! Nice work. And you're right your characters don't need any names. They are perfect. I loved your ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Vision And Veracity

    Interesting theme ! Amazing Creativity ! :D I found the descriptions in the first paragraph beautiful. The last paragraph could be given a look though. I did find some mistakes. ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Lost In Mortality

    Am obsessed with fairies, vampires or any mythological character. So naturally I loved the theme. I think you should expand the story. Tell us how she became a mortal. I ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Winter In Spring

    Nice story ! I found the language poetic somehow ! :) The story is sweet. The characters are cute. :D Good job and keep writing.

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    Nice poem .. Nice theme ! ! Brings out all the emotions of the dyslexic boy real well ! The poem reminds me of the bollywood movie Taare Zameen Par ...

    Jun 24, 2011


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