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I myself just recently wrote a play for a school function and it went horribly wrong. I appreciate your attempt. Its a nice script, nice story. Have nothing much to ...

Decided not to hide after all :P .. The story is nice .. Looking forward to more .. And welcome to YWS ! :D

Okay .. decided to follow you after all .. No point in hiding ! :P Anyway loved your poem .. And what more I understood it completely So didn't have ...

Nice story .. But I felt it lacked the flow .. The concept is nice .. If you just write it in a more clutter free manner maybe it will ...

I didn't think much about the story seeing its length. But once I went through it I was blown away. You put so much thought, so many emotions in such ...

Nice story but I found it too short. Just when I was getting into the story it came to an abrupt end. Also though the story didn't have enough emotions, ...

nice story ! A typical teenage drama .. I have read both the chapters and I liked how you made the MC's so different .. Your story is really good ...

Great poem ! Loved the words in it .. and it kept me hooked right till the end. Is it about a vampire ? (Forgive me for my twilight hangover ...

Nice story. I don't see any problems as such in your story .. But that is not saying much as my grammar sucks ! :P But I liked your characters ...

Loved your story. It was quite funny. I wanted to keep on reading more of it. Just one mistake I found .. He blushed. "You mean Andea? She's good. I ...

Nice story ! Maybe you should begin by writing about Rapunzel. Like she is reading the story and Deeda interrupts her. Like "He climbed up her long golden hair ...... ...

A very good story. But I think it needs a little more work. For one thing, things get very confusing after a point. Once he starts running from those masked ...

Loved your work ! I found your description of the colours beautiful. The starting para was just wonderful. But there are a lot of things I want to know .. ...

Nice story. I will just begin with the one mistake I found in your story - Now he was had moved on with his life. I guess the 'was' was ...

Amazing ! Emotional ! Gripping ! Thrilling ! You are an amazing writer ! Hats Off to You ! You brought out all the emotions so well and kept me ...