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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Winter In Spring

    Nice story ! I found the language poetic somehow ! :) The story is sweet. The characters are cute. :D Good job and keep writing.

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: deleted

    Nice poem .. Nice theme ! ! Brings out all the emotions of the dyslexic boy real well ! The poem reminds me of the bollywood movie Taare Zameen Par ...

    Jun 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Publisher

    I like the story. I like the way you wrote it. You kept a slow and steady narrative and your story plot is strong. I also liked the words you ...

    Jun 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I watched my mother

    I watched my mom as she begged for money in the streets. People hardly glanced at her; after all, who was she but yet another part of the city’s humongous ...

    Jun 24, 2011


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