triggerfingerxx

I thought that it was pretty good except for the fact that it was a bit choppy, try adding in punctuation to help it out a bit :)

Ok so basically you are writing a letter to someone, it could be your mom, yourself, your nose....whatever. it can be funny, serious, or just something to get your emotions ...

"pookie, I cant conentrate"

interesting title, it works well with the poem. word to what ZanyPlebeian said :)

^you have absolutely gooorgeous hair :D thank you! :wink:

She should've worn underpants.

but will be in my heart

^*raises hand* i want a cookie! She should've worn underpants. ....*mumbles*and theres bugs crawling everywhere...

It sounds beautiful, and you are a very eloquent speaker, but i can't decipher it. what do you mean by that?

Belabor has become of me. Derailed imaginations spark felicitously in my wooly-cotton conscience that cadence down to my feet in sundered patterns. Ink. Drips. Down. Echo. The shattered glass writhes ...