treecub

I didnt think the start of this story was worthy of the rest-the dream was more like a poem but it was , in a wierd way-catchey- but still try ...

what warcraft sais is true- ive visted other sites and they mention posetive aspects and negetive aspects-his storie had structure and good description but all some people came up with ...

i was gonna write a big contractiolations message but that wouldent really help you, so i tried to find somthing wrong and after reading it twice i realized somthing about ...

this felt wierd , it had good metaphors and discriptions but i think what made me dislike it was how it was written, in first person past tense , i ...

I...this...huh? how the hell can you produce somthing like this?, are you jk rowling in disguise , are you , ARE YOU!, you must be published by now, i mean ...

while i was reading this , i enjoyed it, you broke some writing rules and at some points(as grifinkeeper has highlighted)you left some stuff out, but so what, if i ...