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Re: d
Salutations. This short story certainly has potential, and with a little more hard work, it can become a fantastic piece of writing! By saying that I don't mean it isn't ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: They just wont fall.
Salutations. This short story certainly has potential, and with a little more hard work, it can become a fantastic piece of writing! By saying that I don't mean it isn't ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: No more Sprites for me
Salutations. This short story certainly has potential, and with a little more hard work, it can become a fantastic piece of writing! By saying that I don't mean it isn't ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: Coffee
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Jul 16, 2014
I think my favorite part about it was the third stanza. You had those two concrete images the second of which didn't seem to relate, but if I imagine that ...