travlingthejourney

This poem was very well written! I'm not sure if you are writing from experience, but it's definitely very personal, and easy to relate to! Definitely keep writing, this is ...

I really liked this poem, you had excellent imagery, i could smell the new shoes! "And stepping on that silver squeaking snail That breaks the once unimaginable silence With the ...

I agree with the other reviews, you were able to put so much emotion and feeling into the poem, and it was very easy to relate to, I think you ...

This is really good! Its what every girl wants to hear! and it is very heart warming and wonderful! Love it!!

Paintings hanging on my wall, none too big, none too small. Collages, drawings, colors galore, far too good for a dusty store. Broadway, Dickerson, and Berlin, not one alike, not ...

I really liked this poem! I don't know if you've read the novel The Namesake but your poem really connects with it!

This poem is really good! it expresses so much emotion in so few words! excellent!