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I think it has a nice rhythm to it. It is simple, but it is still elegant. I wonder why it's so short and my only problem with it is ...

Well I would like to thank you for the review, however, I've never believed in the "don't tell, only show," rule. If it's a rule, where is it written? As ...

I've been working on For the Sake for quite some time now. I'd love to hear any thoughts or suggestions. I have two chapters after this, so let me know ...