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Re: Triple Homicide
It was a decent piece that certainly had shock value. I liked how disturbing it was, but I don't think the protagonist would just become a cannibal. That's a little ...
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Re: For the Sake of Tomorrow
I've been working on For the Sake for quite some time now. I'd love to hear any thoughts or suggestions. I have two chapters after this, so let me know ...
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Re: Snow Fright
I think you should keep writing, but my advice to you is not to make the plot tension so dramatic. You don't have to do something like you do at ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: For the Sake of Tomorrow
For the Sake of Tomorrow Ryan Mitchel Collins Chapter 1 Sir and Mickey got the raw opium a few weeks before, illegitimately of course. Mickey stole a car while he ...
Aug 24, 2011
