tospoby15

I like that it had a lot of historical elements. I like that you used a lot interesting words. I wonder if you could fix some grammar. I like that ...

I like that it had a lot of action. I like that you describe your characters. I wonder if you could check your grammar and spelling. I like that you ...

I like that his parents finally excepted him. I wonder if you could check your spelling. I wonder if you could make the conflict visible. I like you were very ...

I like that you uses real Chinese words for your story and told us what they meant. I like all of the historical elements. I wonder if you could tell ...