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Thanks for reading it :) I'm way further through it right now so i'll edit and divide it ASAP

Hi, Thanks for bothering to review this, I admit it's way too long and I wasn't really expecting a review, it's in one chunk rn because I'm doing it for ...

Haha you're the first person to pick up on that reference. Thanks for the review :)

Yeah I figured it should be higher but I wasn't sure. Thanks for the advice about the sentences as well. The reason this was so unfinished was this was like ...

The description in this story is really good, it almost felt like I was the character. Being a short story, I can't really tell if there is any plot behind ...