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Re: The Perfect Baby Doll Chapter 1
This is a really good start. A couple of things I was wondering about as I read: How does she feel about Roscoe? We know there marriage was arranged. But ...
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: Secret of the One-Chapter 5.1
Did not realize this wasn't the first part of your story! I'm going to go back and read the other parts. So ignore my questions that aren't relevant.
Jan 12, 2015
