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I really like the imagery! I must say, though, that the lines "That sounds so cliché now / But at the moment it was the most perfect thing" seem a ...

I really don't know what you are so worried about... the poem is fabulous! But I have to admit (and God, I must sound like a parrot here!) that I ...

Hi! I'm new here, too, but I hope I can help. Your poem is what I like to call a "cute poem" -- short and sweet. However, the poem feels ...