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Hmm... 8) Very nice, sis. Quite an improvement. I don't have time for a full-blown critique at the moment. (Although, when do I ever? :wink: ) However, I will offer ...

Fear: They ran. They ran as though, by running, they could escape what was coming. They reached the concrete landing and sat there, huddled in the corner. She pressed herself ...

Krill glanced at his hand. Damned boy! The child slipped his knife through my defense. The hand had taken a fair strike, but Krill was sure that it would heal ...

I'm ba-ack! :twisted: Moving right along then... “All you said was that you two were friends and then you split ways before the camps were formed.” I would say this ...

What are you thinking about right now? "Why am I lying in a cave?" -David "I'm wondering if David will be okay. We were pretty close friends. Never thought that ...

Right then, where was I? Oh yes! The critique. :twisted: (Here we go...) Émon rolled his shoulders, and felt the scabs that striped his back wrinkle. They’ve just begun to ...

Eureka! It works! Thanks Claudette. That's all, for now... -tjmk

Hey, if I save a message as a draft, how do I go back and finish it? I can't find it in the saved box in my messages. If you ...

All right, Shafter, you asked for it... :D I'm just going to go through this the way I reviewed/edited it. Top to bottom and then some overall stuff at the ...

{Well then... welcome... I am-} [He's not talking to you. He's in enough trouble as it is being out right now.] Hiya sworddance! Welcome to the group. I'm new as ...

Precisely. (A lot of editing, mind you.) Also, just because his parents were publishers does not mean it was super-ultra easy to publish his book. Sure, it helped, but they ...

All righty then, we're just going to do another mass-message reply. @ Claudette, parlez-vous francais? I don't. I love choir and singing in general. It is awesome. It's okay, I ...

I will admit, I was initially a fan. The story was fun and I was able to move through the books at a fairly quick pace. However, that was my ...

Woah, eleinasari, awesome signature. Do you read Holly Lisle? I have not read any of her novels, but I did read "Mugging the Muse," her book about writing. It is ...

Hey, all, thanks for the welcoming. @ Meshugenah, have you been reading the Legacy of the Force books about Jacen Solo? If so, what do you think of them? @ ...