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Re: The Letters (Next part)
hello! i am titorelli, i will be your reviewer for today, and im guessing im going to be the first one! i'll try not to critique it too hard, cause ...
Dec 13, 2008 -
Re: the man with the touch of death
There once was a man who had a touch of death, that is if any unlucky being touched him in the slightest way they'd be dead in a second. This ...
Dec 13, 2008 -
Re: untitled ( the raid maybe) -part one
"I put my gun agents the back of his neck and my arm round his head, and trusted forward to make him walk again. We walked down the corridor while ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: photography4 (family portrait)
i love the photo, but the words dont exactly fit. The picture makes me feel invited rather than shunned. Everything about this photo is beautiful in every way, and everything ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: confession of a criminal
They say that legend often becomes fact, so before my reputation is completely ruined I want my story to be told. Everyone has blamed me and spat at me for ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Fight the Night
nice structure...i think i got what you are talking about
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: the princess and the drunk
Once upon a time in a dank and dilapidated village in a dank and dilapidated house there was a man who was drinking heavily in a room by himself. He ...
Nov 9, 2008
