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Painfully belated, but thanks for the review, Crunch!

Audy! Your points highlight the areas of poetry that I struggle with, especially when in comparison to prose. I'm used to having the luxury of a little more space to ...

Fortis! My misspelling of Greenwich is shameful. I've never been below the midlands, can I plead ignorance? This is based on an exchange I had with a colleage at an ...

It was originally untitled, I wrote it for NaPo, but my experience of YWS was that untitled works tend to collect an awful lot of dust. That was about two ...

Thank you for your kind words, Aley. I haven't written poetry since I was about 13, so it's like stretching a limb that you haven't used for a good decade ...

I wish I could like this over and over and over and over again.

Thanks much for taking a look at this, and at the previous parts too, Gryphon. Commas and dialogue are my mortal enemy, so I'll have to have a good takle ...

Danke schöne, Suz! The whole writing style was a new for me so I was quite worried about how it had turned out >

Smaur, I think I owe you my first-born child for that #_# Reading it through I can see what you mean about the description being a bit overboard, the unedited ...

*waves and gives cake* Yo, Saint! The ironic thing is that I myself cannot stand porridge XD Thank you so much for taking a look at this for me, and ...

'Siberia' Goodnes knows who wrote it. My Dad bought it for my little sister but I pinched it first and was like wtf? It's lunacy.

Yes, Twit, Scott Westerfeld wrote the Midnighters Trilogy ^^ I think I prefer this series, it has more of a sci-fi edge to it which appeals to me. I should ...

My sister really likes them, but when I tried to read them I kept thinking 'this is a translation... from German... I know German...don't I?' and so I'm trying to ...

You're only applying for one course involving English, yes? Switch the positions of the paragraph about Law, and the one about English, so that they're all going to be reading ...

If you could double-space you paragraphs so they're not as blocky, that would be great, it makes it a lot easier to read and tends to get more readers when ...