timmy41

misuse of the quote tool....total face palm. and wow, unlucky dude.

use your imagination guys. you've gotta rap it. still kinda poor and lazy with the rhymes and well..the whole idea. but if you rap it, it at leasts has funniness ...

r u rly 23?? lol.

ily Curley

hey sorry to screw things up but i got home from a two week vacaton today to find no publishing agreement. Is there any way i can fill it out ...

so for like me..(in australia) i'll get all this mail later i assume??? like should people have the publication agreement yet? lol coz i wont be back home to reply ...

[pre] Blind Sight Have you ever driven along cold country roads on a late autumn night? Stared blankly at the windscreen, subconsciously at your own reflection pressed upon the cold ...

i would feel a bit uppity trying to critique something far better than i could ever do. It's a bit vain. ./

what's not to get? the alliteration makes me shiver, its something new and beyond most of the crap posted on here. oh well i guess some people just dont get ...

Hey, Timmy41. ^_^ This is actually really awesome- it's probably my favorite thing I've read on YWS in quite awhile. You drew me in with poetry and tragedy, and it ...

astounding. obviously far more talented than i dare say most of the other talents on display here. I'm sorry im not up for a critique at the moment as it ...

Boys-draft Shells fell like the teardrops of those left at the bay, crashing remarkably and firing crusted razor shards of malevolent metal exceedingly towards to our enervated British faces. We ...

i thought everyone would have got their replies today??

wow, i submitted mine so long ago when i read the e-mail i had no idea what was going on. Totally forgot about it. I'm inexperienced with this journal thing ...

thanks. yeah i have always had problems with blatantly ridiculous gramatical errors. thanks for picking up on my many shames hahaha. haha the $50 billion thing. Well, in my head ...