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Well, It was good but the descriptions were a bit to confusing. You might overwhelm the reader. I actually tend to skip those kinds of parts where you describe so ...

review and ill upload a picture of my kitten :D?

anyone else wanna review it :)? also chapter 2 will be up within next week. im still writing it, just wrote my actual fave part of the book so far ...

Wow. First of all, it was a clever and well-written story! _> I've never recieved such a compliment :oops: You gave lots of good details so I could visualize the ...

just an update if anyone rereads or reads this or if i have a fan

Yay, action! :smt003 Once again, great story. However, once again, I saw errors in grammar and comma usage. Also, I felt that Tessa's death was a little rushed. "Tessa eyed ...

Hey Tiggs! :D Although it was kind of long, I liked this, especially the part about the arranged marriages. I mean, who doesn't love deception, lies, and overall drama? The ...

i dont have much to say except it sounded interesting and id definitly read more! also any chance of a review for my story

for anyone interested I plan to draw a map right now to pretty much remind me where everyone, creatures, kingdoms, cities etc are will be much more helpful on me ...

anymore reviews or anyone else taken interest in it :)? also chapter 2 will be up within a week. i will say how it is in the words of my ...

This was interesting. Some things I would change: The prologue- Is it a newspaper article? It seemed to have hard to read spacing. Yeah it was a newpaper article, I ...

not much a bump just an update that in about 24 hrs i will be editting the whole first message to include a much better written version of events :) ...

Names like "Gaylord" aren't particularly funny and don't contribute to your story. I will reply to your review in a few hours when im actually awake as its past midnight ...

Umm... I don't know where to begin. First off I'd like to know how old these children are because it seems to me that if a child who has a ...

please paragraph it than i will read and review