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Re: Onyx Sky(Book 1)
Hi, sorta having a hard time reading this. Any chance you can edit it and press on the story button which is next to "special formatting" Oh and first thoughts. ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Bad blood (Not sur eon the name :-/ help please!)
Hi I'm tigs and I'll be your reviewer for the moment I looked up at the tall, towering house, the windows where shattered and the door looked kicked in. My ...
Feb 10, 2010 -
Re: Alice Who Lives Down the Rabbit Hole; Ch. 3
i like this chapter alot, will continue reading... very interesting. I originally thought it'd just be a stupid alice in wonderland knock off but it doesnt seem that way yet. ...
Feb 9, 2010 -
Re: Alice Who Lives Down the Rabbit Hole; Ch. 1
Finally decided to review peoples works, maybe than people will review mine ehh. Ok took me a little bit of time to get through but dont take that as anything ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: Lithium chapter 1: Confusion
Hm, this story isn't bad so far... We may look pretty traditional, but we're not. Really, we're a half-breed family. My mother is a witch and my father, a vampire ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: Thief...Chapter one...Night Watch
“I haven’t spotted him yet, the thief is probably creeping around somewhere on the outer edge…” just read it and i liked it. so far the only thing i can ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Unforgettable : Prologue
Little did I know that I would never see them again. ok i read all of it and it is interesting the only thing i really disliked was the quoted ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Double Blind Part 1
I'm currently upto nathans part. I read a bit of the reviews before reading to make sure it was good due to length :P everyone seems to love the fact ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Maxim (Prologue)
Ok it was an interesting read, but what in gods name was going on :S I'll reread again try take more notice but :S edit 2nd read around its fantastic ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Hellfire Part 5
"Ah..." she said. "This is ancient. It tells of an average girl whose life is perfect and then one day it all goes wrong." My eyes widened and I listened ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Hellfire Part 4
"Yes. Tyranny. You see, when I was younger, I had a dream of a beautiful wolf with the name Tyranny. She didn't look quite like this, but she was beautiful, ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Hellfire Part 3
"I-I've never seen it do that before...then again, it doesn't do much, but it's actually having a response to your presence. This is so unusual..." Conqet said. She stared at ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Hellfire Part 2
Ok um vampire slayers :shock: _> I'll read on but _> ok. Though I must say its better and easier reading than most authors out there(I've said that so much ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Hellfire
Just started reading, never the best reviewer but I plan to go on so fantastic stuff! Any chance you can pm me what it was like before first person? And ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Star-Flight (Chapter I)
Ok my review wont be long as I liked it but 1. The chapter was unbelievably short and I hope that is only the first draft? Cause nothing happened really.... ...
May 12, 2009
