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Thank you both for the comments. ^^

Thank you all for commenting! @Georgiexx: I'll definitely try to expand on the first sentence a little and add the James Dean glossy eyes thing. ^^ @ASH1397: I'll definitely try ...

Thanks for reviewing and I'm happy you enjoyed it! I'll definitely fix the "minute" thing. It seems almost redundant and I'm surprised I didn't catch it while editing. I also ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for pointing out the typo. I actually have a plot bunny right now for a Little Red Riding Hood ...

Thank you both for the reviews! As you both pointed out, Wolfe is definitely too young to be thinking something like that. Thanks, I don't have any siblings and don't ...

Thanks for the advice! About the worthless dirt/worthless relationships thing, thank you for pointing that out. When I reread it after I wrote it, I saw dirt all by itself ...

Thanks, everyone!!! @Davidmartin: your comment totally made my day!!! :D @TheNewHero: I agree with Davidmartin on this; it's definitely an interesting idea. I'm itching to try writing it like that ...

Thanks for all the suggestions everyone! :D I really appreciate it! Seriously, thanks for giving me all this great advice. I really need it since I don't know hardly anything ...

... Ohhh, I get it now. That's extremely cool! :D Great idea!

... There's a riddle? :thud: *is extremely unobservant* Well, now I'm off to search for what, with my stupid riddle-inept brain, will undoubtedly be hours to find the riddle and ...

Thank you guys so much! I totally realize the whole abruptness and unclear motivations of the first part, and perhaps I'll go back and fix it someday. For the most ...