tigress5674

First off, I really liked this poem. I really liked the angry tone of it, and really it was just awesome. So all I have are nitpicks and not really ...

This was fantastic! It was so sad, I seriously started to tear up. I haven't heard the original song, so I can't say if it's a good parody or not, ...

I really liked this. I can't think of much in the way of critique other than what's been said. I definitely enjoyed it, though! I loved the ending (it made ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm Tigress, and I'll be reviewing your story today (clearly :wink: )! I'm going to do the whole "quote the whole thing and write my comments ...

I really enjoyed this! The ending definitely had to be my favorite part, just because it's so sad that after hearing all that he'd just walk away. And while I ...

I really like your writing style. You have some beautiful sentences there! However, I agree with sillyducky that the tenses are a bit messed up and that it's confusing. As ...

I really liked this! The parallel between their thoughts was nice, and I liked the formatting you used where the POV switched every paragraph. At points the parallel between their ...

Hi Tale! I must say, I really liked these lyrics! Seriously, they're way better than most of what's on the charts right now. They're catchy, have a nice rhythm, and ...

Hi! I really liked this, mostly because I can totally relate. I think you had a very good start, and the idea of doing it from a tree's perspective was, ...

Evermore by Alison Noel, hands down. I wanted to stop reading it after the first page, but I had (stupidly) promised a friend I'd read it. I curse myself for ...

Looking for Alaska is one of my favorite books of all time! I love John Green. ^^ He's definitely my idol. If you haven't already, you really need to read ...

I like the idea you have; the bus metaphor is a really good way of looking at this particular subject. However, I agree with the others that there definitely needs ...

Okay, I really, really loved this! It was cute, clever, and very funny! I enjoyed it all the more since I've recently been learning about Buddhism. ^^ My favorite part ...

Definitely The Ice Wolf Trilogy by James Jenson and Brian Christie. They are the most well written books I've ever read, and I'm not exagerating. Those guys are masters at ...

I really liked this! As an agnostic with Bhuddist principles (a little different but still essentially the same) I could really relate to it and I thought it carried a ...