tiggpanda145

Thank you! :D

Thank you! I couldn't have it any longer for the competition as it had a word limit! Yes, I agree with all your comments! Thanks! :D

Thank you-at last someone has taken into account that I was 11!!! And you're the first person to say that it is relatable because you don't know what the Sad ...

Hi ArcticMonkey-just realised I put assement instead of assessment-oops!

Thank you! When I said 'dramatic' I actually thought about just saying monologue-you see we had an english assement we had to do and it was called 'dramatic monologue' so ...

Wow...aaargh people tell me to split it then you say no! Thanks for this review-are you being serious or is it just like yeah! Thanks! :D

I have split it up now everyone! Thanks for the help!

Thank you very much! I agree-I need to split it up! But yeah, thanks for the positive review!

Thanks! Wow, long review! I definitely need to split it up-I was thinking that as I posted it as I had done this piece a while ago...but I was really, ...

Thank you! It's true, I really need to split the beginning bit up! :D tiggpanda145

Thanks for the review! We were only allowed 250 words so I had to cut it short-they wanted info. on the film and opinions so yeah. I had a day ...

well human's can be cruel...

Thanks! I am basically trying to say that human's are cruel and anything that is slightly different is never really accepted or you could say somone in pain too. Then ...

Thanks, I was only 11 when I wrote this so yeah-I could craft it to make it so much better now! Thank you for the feedback! Do you have any ...

This is supposed to be a review but I forgot to change it to one-sorry! :)